| Celeste
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2024-12-09
sometimes it's so heavy to live with lots of questions inside his brain that one finds the need to meet someone...
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| Very Rarely
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2024-12-02
he is out centered of his youth but still he hasn't lost his mind, hopefully
but just think on those who have lost their own identity by loosing their mind
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| Mind drifts this way sometimes
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2024-12-01
alas, and the memory of suffering remains intact
oldness is a wreckage
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| The unknown poet ( 1 )
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2024-12-01
the missing and the mess
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| ashes from your urn
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2024-11-23
very emotional...hard times they must have been
sad
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| Emanuel & Birgitta II
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2024-11-23
the title made me think of Brigitte and Emanuel Macron, The French President and his wife...
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| awakening (haiku cluster)
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2024-11-21
a poem as we are used to, classical and beautiful
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| C O N T A G I O U S ;
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2024-11-15
it is a mode of conquest
we are its conquistadors
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| I AM LOOKING FOR A PENNY BY ANN WOOD
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2024-11-11
go to penny lane (wink)
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| my daily dose of humanity
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2024-11-11
love who conveys life conveys death (the virus AIDS)
are you phishing? or fishing?
whoever comes here and comment will make the deal
you lack of self-esteem!
try to find a comforter, realize that you were born alone and that you shall die alone
have a nice week!
Albert
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| What’s more important?
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2024-11-06
most of the time, you are not in charge of your moments except when you are an actor, you recreate the world on stage
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| Time to Live (renrhyme challenge)
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2024-11-01
made me think of Blade Runner, (was it intended?) and the famous reply followed by "time to die"
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| RACE! RACISM!
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2024-10-28
very good
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| Outer Rooms
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2024-10-23
Radio news
about sustainable forestry
brings tears to my eyes
? I don't understand your feeling here
except that there is no network in forests
it's an ecosystem, a biotope
no antennas on the top of the trees
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| Standby II
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2024-10-23
very nice imagery
made me want to write some more poems
about time; I wonder if thoughts are linked with time if there is a past, a present or a future
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| You Will Not
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2024-10-22
your poem comparing to what Uncle Meridian uses to post are opposed on one relevant point
He uses a lot of capital names when you use only pronouns, it makes yours more readable but more unreferenced too quite unearthed, like thoughts coming from a random head
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| jester’s truth
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2024-10-20
we live more and more in a post truth era...
I love the association between dance and words! very adequate, it needs music and rhythm it made me think of moth too
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| A POEM
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2024-10-16
welcome back
I missed you
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| ginkgo
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2024-10-15
the second stanza
first line, could be the definition
of a funnel, foam billowing
black hole
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| Up to Me
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2024-10-14
break it or glue it !
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| Not An Inconceivable Win
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2024-10-14
il semble que si vous êtes heureux sur cette partie de l'océan, l'autre partie sera triste comme une échelle
better not to divide his family on both parts, wife in Canada and husband in Europe
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| Guessing So
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2024-10-13
tomorrow is another day!
don't meditate on bad luck
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| Reflection
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2024-10-11
a fine reflection about reflection
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| News About My Father
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2024-10-04
if you don't go then you'll be haunted by his absence
if you go then you'll be sad but in peace with yourself
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| dream slices
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2024-10-03
food for thoughts
but are they good for health?
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| Hello Scammer,
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2024-09-30
thank you for this, on the name of all the victims
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| Broken Horizon
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2024-09-29
the parallels of a road join at the horizon, if you take it in front
we are a point on the horizon ?
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| Freedom of Speech
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2024-09-28
at least, you need someone to listen to you
it's a prerequisite
we have the right to vote, which is a written voice
but I don't believe too much that it will make
a difference, the parties always can recuperate
the voices
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| rue the hay
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2024-09-28
but yet someone's pondering?
some acts are irrational
I like the idea that buds cannot hide
and hindsights may be necessary
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| freudian sips
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2024-09-27
and freud's hiccups
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| loopy
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2024-09-27
I wish I could help you with little tricks
maybe you need to express your thoughts
to someone who is respectful to what
you have to say
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| Lingering
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2024-09-25
i have found a definition to mean identity
it is an administration concept that links together what is on a paper, your identification signalement and the real person but it remains a risk that the match is not 100% correct because of fraud or uncertainty
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| Faint Signs
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2024-09-25
I don’t understand why you wished to be dead? Left without an explanation
You had nobody else to talk to except to a therapist in your dreams
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| Blessed rain
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2024-09-24
Esther and Marine
not why the composed name Stella-marine
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| Soma
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2024-09-24
for there is something
which would not let the words flow
I had the same feeling
and you know what
I said to myself It was my own illusions
when I think of it
it's not even a thought or a feeling that
I expected to put into words
cheers
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| Now Isn't a Good Time, Cat
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2024-09-22
loved the title, had to come twice on it
quite enigmatic, I mean now isn't the good time
but why ? for the ego maybe the present ego is never the good time, dreamers, active people, what time did they chose to live in?
nostalgia
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| WELL
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2024-09-22
play with words
and dyslexia, I can relate
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| Short Work
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2024-09-19
Winter seems so harsh,
spring and fall all too easy,
summer’s but a blink.
this last stanza made me meditating
what we really call summer for us humans
bears hibernate probably because they eat
so much food and they are wild animals
that you find in circuses
I thought wild animals would not be fat
they are fat and solitary
eat honey, are dangerous and omnivorous
to come back to your first stanza, haiku
it is a so compacted form of writing
that one has to struggle with the meaning
you did a great job
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| A Moment
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2024-09-19
will within a moment, so right, encapsulated like an astronaut or a beer (capsule means cockpit in French, but also the top of a bottled beer)
and then moment is time, but can you mesure it? tell when it started when it didn't start on your will and end because you must let it go
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| Always Smiling
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2024-09-19
smile, and simile
yes smile together makes look familiar like family
I enjoyed this
I don't know, I just like people,
And when I'm with them, they
Make me smile, and laugh, which
Is something I very much enjoy
I just think if that was to be studied in high school, what would say the teacher...
but now, I remembered at the same time, your time in a working place that makes you want to look through the window and share the noise with...the birds (just imagining)
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| Embarassment
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2024-09-19
hard to escape, our mind escapes our skull through our words, it should confort us, in a way?
Tears fall freely; I break at the sight
of the sun flickering through the trees
the glorious mottling of light
painted on this old country mile
Tears fall freely, it got me touched !
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2024-09-16
why such rules, we don't have the freedom to make it better?
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| THE STORY OF MY LIFE
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2024-09-16
I can understand your resentments or your regrets.
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| The Saddle
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2024-09-14
many employees sat on a chair, some workers never sat at all, you sat on a saddle most of the time, isn't life a matter of what you are sitting on?
I've enjoyed this poem all the way through and if some day, you decide to write your life's story, I'll enjoy to buy your book and sit and tell to myself, I have knnown this guy through poetbay.com for a long time
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| Cutting Time
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2024-09-11
dripping in my head, the precipitations made me hurry
very good indeed
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| GRAPEFUL EXISTENCE
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2024-09-10
very good indeed
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| Austice
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2024-09-09
I can imagine a meal in the desert
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| Don't stir the muddy waters
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2024-09-09
don't excavate in a cemetery indeed
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| Hypocrisy
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2024-09-09
Hypo Crisis
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| FOR SIS
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2024-09-08
bro's and sis
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