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Celeste

2024-12-09
sometimes it's so heavy to live with lots of questions inside his brain that one finds the need to meet someone...


Lesson 57

2024-12-03
life is tough, you learn after you have done some mistakes, practical comes first, that's what life's lessons are all about


Lesson 56

2024-12-02
I’m simply eyes and ears.
unless the Mac computer where you get a single entrance,
things comes into your mind through two different paths
beware the virus. you'll have to check both the entrances


Very Rarely

2024-12-02
he is out centered of his youth but still he hasn't lost his mind, hopefully
but just think on those who have lost their own identity by loosing their mind


Mind drifts this way sometimes

2024-12-01
alas, and the memory of suffering remains intact
oldness is a wreckage


The unknown poet ( 1 )

2024-12-01
the missing and the mess


Lesson 53

2024-11-27
I think a tyrannic mind doesn't care about being loved
he prefers to be feared
and I don't think we are all born the same, we carry differences that still need to blossom


ashes from your urn

2024-11-23
very emotional...hard times they must have been
sad


Emanuel & Birgitta II

2024-11-23
the title made me think of Brigitte and Emanuel Macron, The French President and his wife...


Lesson 50

2024-11-22
all that, very rich people need also simple things

the simpler, the more human they are I guess


Lesson 49

2024-11-22
I think it's an hommage to the one you love deeply
but love is sometimes when you feel your partner as a part of yourself


awakening (haiku cluster)

2024-11-21
a poem as we are used to, classical and beautiful


Lesson 48

2024-11-20
very complicated for me but I can sense the beauty in it

I feel that I miss something here

cheers!


Lesson 46

2024-11-19
you fly in high skies...
Being is a trap made me want to know more about your Lesson 46,
because for quite a lot of people, it means everything like if we were living in an ocean of Being
what is lighter, the dreams or the sand? good questions raised here

thank you !


Lesson 45

2024-11-19
I am not used to manipulate the concepts behind the evil just that if you add a "d" it makes devil... sometimes I think it is very overrated because of his lack of definition...
I've enjoyed your Lesson 45 as usual


Lesson 44

2024-11-18
I like your profound voice
strong like a good coffee
the opening lines are a trigger


Lesson 43

2024-11-17
Love made a man of me. And the girl?

I like this very much, and the full stop too


C O N T A G I O U S ;

2024-11-15
it is a mode of conquest
we are its conquistadors


Lesson 41

2024-11-15
some epic images
unusual images brought together

I once walked through buildings and buildings
it gives a sense of smallness

the Earth shall shake like...dogs with fleas!!


Lesson 39

2024-11-14
maybe we relive in bugs....and as bugs, we know it!
May be before June


Lesson 38

2024-11-13
if you don't do it for yourself
at least, do it for Jesus !


I AM LOOKING FOR A PENNY BY ANN WOOD

2024-11-11
go to penny lane (wink)


my daily dose of humanity

2024-11-11
love who conveys life conveys death (the virus AIDS)
are you phishing? or fishing?
whoever comes here and comment will make the deal
you lack of self-esteem!

try to find a comforter, realize that you were born alone and that you shall die alone
have a nice week!
Albert


Lesson 33

2024-11-09
some don't like surprises!

personally I prefer to have some good friends who are unpredictable and some "bad" friends predictable


Lesson 31

2024-11-06
yes, probably that love doesn't need explanations
it is something that you understand while living it ?


What’s more important?

2024-11-06
most of the time, you are not in charge of your moments except when you are an actor, you recreate the world on stage


Lesson 30

2024-11-06
you master English so much better than I
I am almost jealous
keep your spontaneity...?


Lesson 29

2024-11-04
the fact that we can be one person with 2 languages on the same level makes it very interesting...men can do more than one thing at a time isn't it?


[naming the need]

2024-11-04
it reads like a prayer


Lesson 27

2024-11-04
being a monster and being scared to the point it freezes you...does it make some sense?


Lesson 28

2024-11-03
I like your style, bare, harsh


Time to Live (renrhyme challenge)

2024-11-01
made me think of Blade Runner, (was it intended?) and the famous reply followed by "time to die"


Lesson 24

2024-11-01
you might get scared of yourself!


Lesson 25

2024-11-01
I can't buy time from...G-d?
but I can buy your time


RACE! RACISM!

2024-10-28
very good


Outer Rooms

2024-10-23
Radio news
about sustainable forestry
brings tears to my eyes

? I don't understand your feeling here

except that there is no network in forests
it's an ecosystem, a biotope
no antennas on the top of the trees


Standby II

2024-10-23
very nice imagery
made me want to write some more poems

about time; I wonder if thoughts are linked with time if there is a past, a present or a future


You Will Not

2024-10-22
your poem comparing to what Uncle Meridian uses to post are opposed on one relevant point
He uses a lot of capital names when you use only pronouns, it makes yours more readable but more unreferenced too quite unearthed, like thoughts coming from a random head


jester’s truth

2024-10-20
we live more and more in a post truth era...
I love the association between dance and words! very adequate, it needs music and rhythm it made me think of moth too


[1990]

2024-10-20
aggressive but can we live without violence? I don't think so, we are not plants that bow under the wind
"You were worse than Tom Petty
duetting with Stevie Nicks."

Stevie Nicks, I just got to know her! "edge of 17"


A POEM

2024-10-16
welcome back
I missed you


ginkgo

2024-10-15
the second stanza
first line, could be the definition
of a funnel, foam billowing
black hole


Up to Me

2024-10-14
break it or glue it !


Not An Inconceivable Win

2024-10-14
il semble que si vous êtes heureux sur cette partie de l'océan, l'autre partie sera triste comme une échelle
better not to divide his family on both parts, wife in Canada and husband in Europe


Guessing So

2024-10-13
tomorrow is another day!
don't meditate on bad luck


[guidance]

2024-10-13
I like it
the immobile stuff


Reflection

2024-10-11
a fine reflection about reflection


News About My Father

2024-10-04
if you don't go then you'll be haunted by his absence
if you go then you'll be sad but in peace with yourself

?


dream slices

2024-10-03
food for thoughts
but are they good for health?


[journey]

2024-10-01
very good