alarian

2024-12-11
let me add something:
many truths are relative few are absolute
the best truths are the ones that work for you!
you have to find it yourself because it makes you
unique and valuable to yourself

you can continue to dig wishing you'll find your way out
or a treasure
or stop digging because it's too much of an effort that will kill you

we oppose many reasons to continue living, the one you started with can be forgotten and replaced by another fitting more the actual situation you are living

2024-12-10
why 7?

2024-12-09
sometimes it's so heavy to live with lots of questions inside his brain that one finds the need to meet someone...

2024-12-09
just ask yourself where I was before and before and before (reverse motion) and you will reach your place of birth going through your place of living but not your place of origin I guess...(of course not)

2024-12-07
2-gather, 2 get there, together

the law is inflexible, if you represent the law, be flexible!

2024-12-06
yes, health is a business, this is the final answer, you can get hit if one manages your health like a business with business plans

2024-12-04
a deadly situation...at the origin of the great migrations, impacting the poorest countries, there are the climate changes

personally, half the planet is ready to declare the war..I think it could start in Asia
tensions are everywhere, changes are happening so fast (climate, technology) that no one is prepared to adapt to the new economy
I know it's a strong summary to explain what is going on...probably too big a shortcut to give a straight and suitable answer...

2024-12-04
yes this is the paradox of the pessimists
if things are so bad (pessimism), they can only improve (optimism) it's like having a good and a bad news for you
it can be so bad to that even death is a salvation

2024-12-04
a good personification of a love feeling...at least you can enjoy that moment without any coupable thoughts due to religious education....in a way a safe dream

2024-12-03
just think yourself as a part of a huge living experiment who will help the next generations to get through this ! cynicism, when you hold me, it's terrible !

2024-12-03
you have presented the life of the successful people as a performance on stage with its implicit rules of life and dominating acts
she appears to dominate the parking boy but the story doesn't tell if she is somewhere else a pawn in the hand of the masculine world

2024-12-03
well you have linked the two tips of an equation of indulgence
Biden, the father on one tip, the police on the other
just wonder if Biden was a police officer
what kind of indulgence would it have been, both tips together ?

2024-12-03
we live more and more in an hybrid world
what you call your culture may well be bits of a bigger frame in the future
your culture might as well have been monetized

2024-12-03
life is tough, you learn after you have done some mistakes, practical comes first, that's what life's lessons are all about

2024-12-02
the goal was to romanticize the ways the rapist chooses his prey, does he make his choices only regarding the danger....

2024-12-02
I’m simply eyes and ears.
unless the Mac computer where you get a single entrance,
things comes into your mind through two different paths
beware the virus. you'll have to check both the entrances

2024-12-02
every one's searching someone else's findings
so they can help each other
happiness comes without effort
or after the work done?

2024-12-02
he is out centered of his youth but still he hasn't lost his mind, hopefully
but just think on those who have lost their own identity by loosing their mind

2024-12-01
I meant crater as something deep
and the flying object, here the missile as something light
it was I think, a kind of metaphor (image) about deep and light

2024-12-01
pain, the everlasting question? Why do I suffer, are their roots deep in me, is it a chain reaction going through myself and born in my existence ?
I remembered your queen telling, never complain never explain
I'll try to make a text out of it and publish something
thank you Liam

2024-12-01
alas, and the memory of suffering remains intact
oldness is a wreckage

2024-12-01
the missing and the mess

2024-11-30
it works so well
between the predator and the prey
that I wonder why they don't make one unity, without that link of fleeing and being devoured ?

2024-11-27
stars see their beauty on their face
but fans only see beauty on stars' faces

2024-11-27
this sound is supposed to have a meaning!

2024-11-27
I think a tyrannic mind doesn't care about being loved
he prefers to be feared
and I don't think we are all born the same, we carry differences that still need to blossom

2024-11-27
because it existed before you
you adapted to it

2024-11-23
don't be so accessible! I've understood your poem at first reading

2024-11-23
very emotional...hard times they must have been
sad

2024-11-23
the title made me think of Brigitte and Emanuel Macron, The French President and his wife...

2024-11-23
Two languages, is it like riding on 2 wheels instead of one?

2024-11-23
back to the roots
or
back to black (ACDC, Amy Winehouse)

2024-11-22
all that, very rich people need also simple things

the simpler, the more human they are I guess

2024-11-22
I think it's an hommage to the one you love deeply
but love is sometimes when you feel your partner as a part of yourself

2024-11-22
we are locked by the clock
we are clocked in and soon clocked out

2024-11-21
a poem as we are used to, classical and beautiful

2024-11-20
Now I think it is a very nice vignette
what are your influences in poetry ?
never dared to ask you before
I felt it when I read the last line
sounded very author-like

2024-11-20
very complicated for me but I can sense the beauty in it

I feel that I miss something here

cheers!

2024-11-20
in one way, one would say that in order to share the same faith you have to give allegiance to the same G-d?

2024-11-19
Fleeting glimpses of understanding
all is abstract in this phrase

my opinion is that your poem is very out-of-reach but not mindless at all. The word I would use mostly is ethereal

like we were in space...floating in spirit, it mades me scared a bit couldn't grasp handles, maybe the archaic fear of drowning

very beautiful thank you

2024-11-19
you fly in high skies...
Being is a trap made me want to know more about your Lesson 46,
because for quite a lot of people, it means everything like if we were living in an ocean of Being
what is lighter, the dreams or the sand? good questions raised here

thank you !

2024-11-19
I am not used to manipulate the concepts behind the evil just that if you add a "d" it makes devil... sometimes I think it is very overrated because of his lack of definition...
I've enjoyed your Lesson 45 as usual

2024-11-19
I deviated from that part
Existence is cartesian...

2024-11-18
what I feel about me is that
random thoughts follow unconscious patterns
only by learning well established poets
you might elevate yourself
otherwise you stir into the same pot
that's how I feel about me
trying to find my path in the dark

2024-11-18
I like your profound voice
strong like a good coffee
the opening lines are a trigger

2024-11-18
somehow, we have to build the paradises and not just imagine us there happier!

with a fixed idea, with a final goal, you may be disappointed when arriving at your destination
between the destination and the road, one has to choose or maybe not, to take both

2024-11-17
Love made a man of me. And the girl?

I like this very much, and the full stop too

2024-11-16
I remember a guy always inviting for dining beautiful and quite dumb ladies, hoping for their favors
once, he went into a fine restaurant
and she ordered a sandwich
exactly what you said
and the butler was smiling in his beard
it is something that has passed through the oceans

2024-11-15
it is a mode of conquest
we are its conquistadors

2024-11-15
some epic images
unusual images brought together

I once walked through buildings and buildings
it gives a sense of smallness

the Earth shall shake like...dogs with fleas!!