I leave you to draw comparisons, dear reader.




GRAPEFUL EXISTENCE

 

Travelling roads through nothing
But grapevines, might be thought
Boring and dull, but right now
For the first time all Summer
We can see the grapes dark and full
Hanging ready for harvesting.
It must be a strange existence
Feeling yourself grow and bloom
But knowing your free will is gone
And there is no other ending
To your life than to be crushed
And squeezed, bled for your juice,
When you could have grown old
Naturally and become a wrinkled
But still valued juicy raisin.



© Griffonner 2024





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Written on 2024-09-10 at 10:21

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one trick pony The PoetBay support member heart!
One wonders if it is a symbiotic relationship with mankind. The vines existence depends on producing, then sacrificing, its progeny.

Wonderful poem, I had visions of vineyards and hillsides. Lovely.
2024-09-11


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
An amusing meditation. As older humans, "raisonhood" sounds appealing to us, but maybe it's not so bad to die young.
2024-09-11


alarian The PoetBay support member heart!
very good indeed
2024-09-10