Lol this had nothing to do with my original intention. Music really influences what I write. Hopefully it will still be enjoyable though :)


Release

Tonight!
I choose my reality
Tongiht...
I choose my release
My plight!
Return to me
My plight...
Leave me be, let me fade

Shadows all around
Memories of past rejections
Silence! Not so much as a sound
They can see us through our reflections
They can hear past our words
Deep into our emotions
Every one of them knows
Every single one our insecurities

Stop!
Walk away from me
Stop!
Stop tempting me
Why!
Why do you stand by me?
Why?
Why have you not forsaken me?

Deep down this cavernous course
The other side of the mirror
The steady drip of our only life source
Faint, abandonned in error
You clutched my hand then
"It's going to be alright"
"This is not our end"
Did you sense my fear, my doubt...

By the light our flame
I can see into your eyes
Confidence in why you came
And yet the child within cries
I hold you close to me
It's about to begin
You've done more than I could ask for
But now, I continue alone




Poetry by Hasani
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Written on 2006-05-08 at 15:49

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Amanda Manmohan
This one was amazing, Hasani! Longer than what you usually write, but I loved it just as much as your other stuff. I particularly love the verses where you used exclamation marks because they really jump out at you. I love your writing style so much! Well done my emo friend! :D
2006-05-08