A haiku about a particular kind of paradise


Paradise by M.A.Meddings

When I touched her
I entered paradise
became enthralled



Poetry by lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-05-10 at 14:21

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Lourdes
you explain pure love here.
so simple, but yet everything.
beautiful..
2006-05-11



Nice little thingy, hero!
2006-05-10


Malin Johansson
That touch is beautiful, We all would wanted to be touched like that...very sensitive words... with an exploading strong feeling... Nice work... Rgds from sunny Sweden :)
2006-05-10


Kathy Lockhart
touch, such a word that is so simple but ignites such fire. kathy
2006-05-10