Pamela A Lamppa
Dare to be captured, dare to be stuck. This visual is chilling as well as inviting. Always a pleaure to read your fine work. ~Pam
2006-05-23

Kathy Lockhart
love is a scary journey especially when we are not sure what we face. The entanglements and then the bite! Is it worth it all?
I love these 2 lines:
"Into the labrynthal silk
Of the lovely spiders web"
Beauty and the Beast right before my eyes.
Love and Pain, Darkness and Light. The beautify of Fire, the colors, the dance and yet it destroys. You have brought so many thoughts to my mind with this beautiful and very truthfilled Tanka. Kathy
2006-05-23

Right now i'm prone to believe that perfect love can be put into the same category as gods:
Things that are very unlikely to exist but that we want to cling to anyway.
In spite of this, hero, I find your poem just as beautiful as your poems always are.
2006-05-23

Malin Johansson
A very short but strong poem... it's great to have you back mike...
Rgds Me
2006-05-23

penfold18
Beautifully written Mike and hauntingly true.
2006-05-23