it is called a Minus poetry because of the form,puntnations and thematic pre-occupation.It is a poem of that pictures the state of mind of prisioners at death door.Thanks Diora


Metal bars divides-
Iron face cry
Crime partners unities
Escape, many try
Enormous figure looming
Matchbox house filled
Death cries ringing
Two hang-men, lead.
Like hell cry-
"heard voices"
Iron face cry
Ugly fate looms
Trigger target done
Wasted factory men
More men gone,
Wasted mortal men...
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Poetry by diora
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Written on 2006-05-24 at 10:50

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This is a powerfully expressive piece of poetry!

Zoya Zaidi
That is a complex poem, both form and content wise, but a very well executed piece of art.
Welcome again my friend to the bay!
You are so good!
Love,xx, Zoya

Onyeka Nwelue
I loved this, but there is too much of this hectic grammar that makes it somewhat to a Minus poetry first time reader.