Another song...


Love For A While

In the beginning,
we started out as just friends,
we started talking,
and that's why I'm lonely again.

We went to dances,
we drank,
and we hit the floor,
and that's what brought me to your door.

And...
Slowly but surely the poison spread,
we pretended and pretended,
till our love was dead.

And I...

(Chorus)

loved you for a while,
I longed to see...
each and every smile...
and when you said...
"I love you, stay and forget",
I always think,
what this would have been,
if we didn't ruin it.

Now I,
wanted more than that,
and it's just a class act,
when I caught you with someone else,
so what now?
I'm just a book on your high shelf?

And I hoped,
that this would be more than a fling,
cuz the best things in life are the blissful things.

And I...

(Chorus)

loved you for a while,
I longed to see...
each and every smile...
but when you said...
"I hate you, forget and leave",
I always think,
what I would have been,
if you didn't ruin me.

And you,
can go to hell and back again,
still,
I won't commend you.

I don't care what you say,
I'm still gonna always hate,
your name on this tatoo.

And now you've had me broken and destroyed,
what more could you want,
(what more could you want)
thanks to you...
(thanks to you...)
my mind,
you will always haunt.

And I...

(Chorus)

loved you for a while,
I longed to see...
each and every smile...
but when you said...
"Go to hell, I hate you",
I always think,
I didn't pick up on some social cue.

And I...

(Chorus 2)

loved you for a while...
I longed to see...
each and every smile...
and when I think,
of the times that we have shared,
it makes me wish,
that our vision never really was impaired...






Poetry by Lucas
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Written on 2006-05-26 at 21:33

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nausheen
stong thinking...keep it up!
2006-07-09


The Charmed One
I have the beat, you have the lyrics, wow, what a great song.
Save me as your friend?????????
2006-06-24


PoeticProcrastination
I love this song. You should play it...and record it...and it will be awesome...yeah...
2006-05-31


Connor
Great poem lucas
2006-05-27


F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
yeah stepping the friendship line over to the romantic aspect of relationships is a sort of gamble... more often than not the feelings expressed in this song are the end result... not to be boring in saying this, but i could identify with this situation... a good song you wrote, i liked it very much... for my personal curiosity, in which style/category of music is this song set to? thanks for sharing :f

later... xx
2006-05-27


CherryFairy
Wow. that was really good.
you SHOULD start playing.
keep it up! i love reading them!!!
-cf/kg
2006-05-27


Andy
good song. like the tatoo line.
2006-05-27


pritchard
wow... cool song/poem thing it'll be really awesome when you guys actually start playing these things... rock on!
2006-05-26