Feint

leaf trembles
as violent truth
a gale
blows asunder
all relief and
swallows defense

delicate
longing
feint

a lopsided ceiling
caves
remains
a woebegone
dispirited display
a monument

gentle wind
or brazen,
fall away
or stay

tis a poisoned tree
and both shall die
in winter
neither
to be reborn




Poetry by StillHoppin The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2018-11-07 at 05:18

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jim The PoetBay support member heart!
This does flow, and then becomes totally crushing in the end.
2018-11-08


shells
Wow, I love this. There's something cathartic, but tender here. I agree, beautiful use of language, it flows.
2018-11-08



This is beautiful language, thoughtfully crafted. It captures the attention and rewards the reader immediately.
2018-11-07