and the band plays on



for a staid woman marketa sure

knows how to let go   


the dj puts on ball of confusion   i wish you

could see what i'm seeing




beyond the kinetic energy   there is the

glint in her eye   and


once in a blue

moon smile that means look out      




for every one of her lily smiles   i pay a

thousand woolen


skirt moments   but oh that smile   i

pay readily







Poetry by one trick pony The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2019-06-25 at 00:24

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josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
Dynamic, cinematic and lusty!

Nabeela Altaf
This poem says so much in just a few lines. Very well done. This is an artistic piece.

Yes, we agree with Yayāti, otp :>)

Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
Nicely done!

Once again, you've captured the scene like no other.

And I'm sure given your talents, if you describe what you were seeing it'd be as well or even better than seeing it ourselves.

MetaPoetics The PoetBay support member heart!
A poetically captured moment.