to my brother in law this is written with so much love from me!

P~ practically like a brother to me
A~ always standing up for me
T~ taking time to talk to me when in time of need
R~ really I don't want you to leave for the war
I~ I just want you to know that I love you
C~ can't wait until you CAME back
K~ kids will miss you

D~ don't die on me please
O~ oh I will write you everyday
O~ only promise me that you will be safe
Z~ zoo we can go to when you come back
E ~ every night I will pray for you!

Poetry by lynn
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Written on 2006-06-02 at 18:11

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very well written

thats pretty good! sad though. my fioncee is leaveing for bootcamp in a week. hes going into the air force.

It is a very nice poem and the style u use was one in a million style i hope ur brother in law will come back to u safely God sparing his lfe

Beatiful write Lynn:) Very nice dedication poem:) Like I said, you have a big and kind heart:) And you do not hesitate to show wich is amazing Lynn:) Once again, beautiful poem:)

Love from Alex:)