dark mind

i wandered through
a barren land
of fruitless words
and vanished
dreams floating
away as mist on
a darkened river
where tears
blew away as
sand on
a sorrowful shore
hollow tunnels echoing
creating
trembling waves of
sound subsiding to silence
turning thoughts to
melting
ice






Poetry by Marie Cadavieco
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Written on 2019-10-03 at 01:02

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I like the cadence of this poem, the careful rhythm, careful but flexible.
2019-10-05


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We all may wander through a glass, darkly; but only you come out

"turning thoughts to
melting
ice"

Stunning.
2019-10-03