Curled up in bed on a winter evening, could really use a cuddle!




Tinder Goals

They match on Monday, 

Text on Tuesday, 

Meet on Wednesday for dessert.

 

She's busy Thursday, 

He's casual Friday. 

Saturday no one gets hurt.

 

What he really wants is 

To wake up on Sunday 

And have nothing to do with you.

 

What she really wants is

To wake up on Sunday

And have nothing to do but you.





Poetry by Purple Puddles
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Written on 2019-12-14 at 21:37

Tags Dating  Casual  Week 

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F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
The longing for companionship is coming across really well in this. The construction of where this is going is done beautifully in its flow and the turning point of the last line really caught me by surprise, but a very pleasant one. I really enjoyed the way you wrote and presented the moment. I can feel the sighs...

Language: 5
Format: 5
Overall: 5
Mood: 5
2019-12-17


poetic pilgrim The PoetBay support member heart!
the first point that reached my mind was to know if it was a man or a woman which had written this. easy to pinpoint the idea, tasteful indeed
2019-12-15


one trick pony The PoetBay support member heart!
A subtle, amusing, sad, true take on our world today. A perfect poem.
2019-12-14