Written by Stace and me....im in bold...and im glad shes here..ive written the odd lines and shes written the even...


Heartaches in Spring

once, long ago when the spring birds sang...
A strange new feeling began
the wind was blowing sweet kisses again
Will this all remain,
thought I, or will it be in vain
The spring turned to summer, the feelings grew stronger
and those moments of bliss seemed to be longer..
I was made to feel so wonderful,
there was colour in my cheeks, my hair danced and everything was beautiful
We spent nights laying watching the stars,
put our heads together and looked at the moon and mars
I rest my head upon your chest, listen to your heart beat
a shooting star streaks across the sky, delighted that we meet...
Yet when you are gone, I feel so alone.
the rivers run dry and the stars go home
Nothing fills the void that you leave
my heart lets out a sigh, but i wear it on my sleeve
Music doesn't soothe my soul like your voice
and the way my heart aches, there is no choice
My heart aches to see your smile, yet a photograph doesnt compare
my heart aches, my heart aches, but no one else can tell
You are the cure to my heart ache
my sweet poison, my saving grace
Time drags betweeen our meetings of love
and life seems to hang in its web
I become a different person around you,
but without you I'd be lost
I love you more than that first moment back in spring
but my heart aches still with mortal longing
You give me a sense of belonging
you were there when the tears came calling
You held me till I felt like smiling
and life came back....it had been hiding
You fight the dark shadows and bring back that spring feeling
silver knighted on a horse, my heart you were stealing...
and if you promise to stay I'll let you steal again and again
At least this way I know that this feeling wont end




Poetry by Umang
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Written on 2006-06-07 at 18:58

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Arti
I dont mind saying this again - since i forgot to rate it the first time round :"> - love the images and passion...
Arti.
2006-06-08


Arti
Was this really written by two people? Its so beautiful!
Jus find a tune - this is meant to be a song.
Arti.
2006-06-08


Shas Ramlogan
Written like one poet, underlining the connection you both have made with this piece. My favourite lines are

"Yet when you are gone, I feel so alone.
the rivers run dry and the stars go home"

That says it all.
2006-06-08