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NOTE:  2020 06 04  22H54 EST  Ramblings 515 - random...




Ramblings 515

 

The elephant in the room

Evidently got beyond fed up

And to remedy the moment

Stamped on all of them

Leaving a bloody mess

That no one could ignore

Maybe now time'll be allotted

To address the lack of concern

 





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Written on 2020-06-05 at 14:53

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Excellent, with a sharp but understated way of making the point.
2020-06-08


MetaPoetics The PoetBay support member heart!
This "rambling" can easily be connected to the larger political picture, especially to what's happening around the globe. I like the use of the elephant as a symbol in the poem.
2020-06-07


Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
What an image. Brought a huge smile. A classic interpretation which in my humble opinion stands with the best. Thanks for posting this gem :)
2020-06-07


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
I like this. It's very cryptic, but, as Jim says, it makes a point. I'm guessing that "the elephant in the room" and the "lack of concern" are real, while the "bloody mess" is more a figure of speech.
2020-06-05


AFRODITE STATHI The PoetBay support member heart!
Wish i could write like you.To create an icon so meaningful through my words is something i haven't managed yet.Bravo.
2020-06-05


jim The PoetBay support member heart!
I'm not sure what this is about specifically, but it's impossible not to get the message.

Very vivid, to say the least.
2020-06-05