In response to Mike, Lastromantichero's challenge to write after his poem: "As love got in the way"- Over to you Mike...


Spring of Desire

I remember the spring of desire,
When you and I were on fire,
When smouldering ambers
Suddenly took to flames,
When winter melted
into the summer
of hot flames licking
our beings entire...
Oh! How we were on fire...
Love oozed out of every pore
Love was in our very core...

I remember the spring of desire,

Do you?


Author: Zoya Zaidi
Aligarh (up), India
Copyright : Zoya Zaidi





Poetry by Zoya Zaidi
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Written on 2006-06-09 at 15:42

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Amanda K
i loved the title very much, attracted me the first time. i loved the poem,even more. could relate 2 it.

thx
2007-01-20


Julie Zerbe
I both remember and savor it. So lovely, and with more it needn't burn out either.
Beautifully put.
2006-07-12


Daybreaker
This is truly magic my friend. I love the first two lines - they really seem to belong together, don't they! =)

How are you? I haven't been here for a while.
2006-06-19


Arti
"When winter melted
into the summer
of hot flames licking
our beings entire..."

Beautiful lines. U're sending me off to dreamland Zoya with these images!

((hugs))
Arti.
2006-06-13


Mirage
"Love oozed out of every pore
Love was in our very core..."

What a wonderful poem
burning out of the screen...
Love the heading!
2006-06-11


Scharlie Meeuws
Ah, those fragrant times, when desire bloomed...who could forget it, ever...
you really brought them back to life, Zoya!

love to you
from Scharlie
2006-06-11


Victoria Pearson
I forgot to rate the piece....so here is it...I will get the hang of this site very soon...
2006-06-10


Victoria Pearson
exquisite imagery....a love song..written in word of ectasy...An exciting piece.... I enjoyed this piece...hugs
2006-06-10


Mr.Mist
...words could not have said it better than this......all i say...

-mr.m
2006-06-10


Teala
Beautiful and emotional, I love the end where you pose a question!
2006-06-10


Shas Ramlogan
Very nice write Zoya, passionate and sensual
2006-06-10


Zoya Zaidi
OK Freinds, I rushing off to the clinic, shall come back to see if Mike responds to this?
I promise more if he does...
**hugs to all**
Love, xxx, Zoya
2006-06-09


Malin Johansson
I love this one :)
and I'm happy to se this writing between the two of you lololol
Applause :D
hugs
2006-06-09


Kathy Lockhart The PoetBay support member heart!
what a pleasure to be here watching this wonderful event unfold. What did I do with myself before I found this site and all the wonderful, talented people here? The words that flowing between you two are like cherry blossom kisses floating in the air, filling it with beauty and the sweet essence of love. The sight and aroma of it all is delightful! :))) kathy
2006-06-09