An old poem, re-worked, I remembered after reading Thomas' "Thunderstorm".




On a Ridge, Storm

 

Under a white oak on the crest of a ridge, 

 

holding the reins, I wait for the storm

knowing full-well the risk.

 

Wind rustles and rattles the leaves,

booming timpani thunder beats my chest,

 

the sound of heavy rain on leaves

moves through the timber, approaching,

 

trees sway and bend, defying logic, not physics,

leaves show their silver backside, 

 

meadow grass is laid flat,

the horse's eyes grow wide in agitation,

 

he wants to bolt as the gust-wind hits us,

cold and sure, the storm is on us,

 

and oh, my heart does pound.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 





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Written on 2020-08-28 at 16:31

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AFRODITE STATHI
Loved it Jim.So many vivid icons.
2020-08-29


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
Well done!
2020-08-28


josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
I like this! It’s funny how you’re descriptions fit almost perfectly with being aboard a boat in the ocean watching a storm or squall line approach. Even the tree you under versus the mast I’d be under.
2020-08-28