deceitful person


You lied to me

You lied to me, you disrespected the person that I am,
I believed in what we had,
I took the good and the bad,
But you lied to me,
that tells me
you don't give a damn.
To be untruthful is to not have consideration,
to not consider
is to simply not care,
I feel a coldness through my veins,
I am without control,
You cut the reins,
You lied to me,
An insult, a massive blow,
nothing , no nothing more devestating can compare...



Poetry by Donna Lee Marie Balderama
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Written on 2006-06-11 at 12:30

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Zoya Zaidi
Donna, Donna, Donna!
Such passionate anguish!
It is true lying is an insult of sorts to the person you lied to!
Bravo!
**Hugs**
Love, xxx, Zoya
2006-06-11


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
ouch but you are so corrct in the emotional upheaval caused by this a powerful poem but if you are in love it means trusting and thats the consequence of falling in love or having friends ships nevertheless a very good piece of writing rgds mike
2006-06-11