true love deepens with each passing day. A finale to Zoyas challenge


This Fire By M.A.Meddings

I bet you believed
This love would die
But it never would
And it never could
Just like that
It was far too deep
A bit too real
This fire



Poetry by lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-06-11 at 13:09

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Teala
A lot said in a few lines! Great one!
2006-06-12


Kathy Lockhart
Wonderful image of the eternal flame of love burning. Very nice ending. Will this be posted as one. I would love to see it all together. :)))) kathy
2006-06-11


Malin Johansson
Yes that type of fire is hard to ignore or stop... it will always exist...
Very good poem on a few lines!!!
Sunny Regards
2006-06-11


Zoya Zaidi
Thanks, dear Mike!
What befitting finale!
**hugs**
Love, xxx, Zoya
2006-06-11


Mike
this fire is burning hot!!!
2006-06-11