The grand finale to our poetic dialogue; to lastromantichero's "This Fire"; sigh! I enjoyed it thoroughly! Thanks Mike!


Souls on Fire

Souls on fire:

When two souls are on fire
The fires of desire
The desire's always young
The souls never die,
And neither does the fire!
I remember our souls on fire
Full of desire
This fire still burns
The Soul still yearns...

Love is always young...


Author: Zoya Zaidi
Aligarh (UP), India
Copyright ©: Zoya Zaidi




Poetry by Zoya Zaidi
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Written on 2006-06-12 at 15:44

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Nagamuthu Osho
Respected Doctor, Poetess,

This is very rare and real
Your words pour more truth, the soft words carry the message of Philosophy, with subtle things.
God Bless you.

Yours truly,
N.K.OSHO
2006-09-09


Julie Zerbe
Your poem is certainly full of the fire element. Twice in my life I have seen burn-out however. Still, while alive, hope remains.
It was an enthusiastic write.
Julie
2006-07-15


The Charmed One
I like this. the way you said that love will always stay young is very true, because my love will never age
2006-07-04


Natalie
Beautiful :) as usual
2006-06-13


Teala
Oh, this is very good Zoya! Love does make you feel so young!
2006-06-12


Lourdes
Yes, the vampire-creature called desire. I know it well..
Love is always young ,, and you always have the most beautiful way of describing every known feeling.
2006-06-12


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
hey Zoya this is a beautiful text and finale rgds mike
2006-06-12


Kathy Lockhart
The desire's always young
The souls never die,
And neither does the fire!

Love these lines. So much hope in those three lines. Love never dies!!!!

this compilation and cooperative work is outstanding. I only wish I could see it written as a whole body poem.

xxxkathy
2006-06-12


Benny Strukelj
Great poetry!!!
2006-06-12


Mirage
Souls on fire... hot indeed!

A wonderful write, especially
the last stanza.
2006-06-12