How beautiful you are




How beautiful you are my butterfly
the soft blows of your wings
Like the veils in the haze
you give pleasure


How beautiful is your dress, like
shells in the corner of the mist
How lovely is your shape
when the morning
light rises







Poetry by The sparrow The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2021-08-10 at 12:57

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F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
The gentleness of the words here recreate the butterfly's grace. Very beautifully described, and it sends me back to my childhood when I'd sit on the grass observing these marvelous little creatures. Their colorful wings, their moving around in the breeze with it or against it, it was all so fascinating, relaxing and joyful for me. I enjoyed the effect of your poem, thanks.
2022-06-03


Sona
so so beautiful.
2021-08-14


ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
A bounty of bewty with in this work, The sparrow, welcome into poetbay.
Ken D (Williams)
2021-08-10


one trick pony The PoetBay support member heart!
This is lovely, thank you for sharing ~~~
2021-08-10