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The words

 

 

 


The words you whisper to me

in the soft light of spring
as the wind still breathes
in the light of evening


Gets a thousand wings of longing
to fall within me
slowly a feather falls
in the light within you

 

 

 





Poetry by The sparrow The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2022-05-28 at 16:45

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F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
There's a dream-like quality to the words here that I find very pleasant. Makes me think of how when I read certain writers' words, there's a feeling of being transported away into someone else's soul, so to speak. It's a very special experience to have words make you connect in that manner, and your words had that effect. I enjoy your style, thanks.
2022-06-03


ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
The words we use can mean so much
Ken D.
2022-05-29


Griffonner The PoetBay support member heart!
Poetic for sure, and enigmatic too. The final stanza makes me wonder if this is a comparison between the antagonist and another's depth of meaning?
2022-05-29


jim The PoetBay support member heart!
Beautiful, and gentle, and heartfelt.
2022-05-29