for anyone who has ever felt they didn't compare to others judged on looks and popularity
for all the whores at my school


Pretty Girl

pretty girl standing, spare me the time,
we are opposite people, like lemon and lime
we aren't all that different, cos i'm pretty too,
but my inside is beautiful, so unlike you.

your inside is ugly, as black as they come,
too much bitterness has made you numb,
you laugh at the others, and steal from your friends,
reject all the help that others will send.

but sooner or later, everyone will see,
your inside is ugly, you'll never be free,
the guilt and the sorrow will swallow you whole,
till you're no longer pretty, and free of your soul.



Poetry by laura
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Written on 2006-06-25 at 19:25

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..me..
the flow of the poem was just intense, this has to be my alltime favourite :)) rock on!!!!!!!!1
2006-07-09


Love Knight
You are representing for the young people here. You write so amazingly. Give it up for the younguns again.
But you ARE a pretty girl, be yourself not the whores.
Take your own path, you have chosen well.
2006-06-26


Khrissie
I think your poem was very deep and I can relate...I was always my own person and never followed the crowd on fashion an who was doin what...but to me ...I am a pretty girl..even if I'm fat...b/c i'm a nice person...not b/c how i look...I like ur poem
2006-06-25


Zoya Zaidi
Yeah, this is true,
Some people can give you
a complex about yourself,
By making fun of you,
Laughing at your expense.
But you don't bother about them,
And don't envy them!
You are prettier than them any day,
Because you have a power to see what other can't see.
You can see the goodness in people,
You can gauge the inside of people.
You can feel the real side, the inside, of people,
And that is what makes you beautiful,
Much more than any peachy, creamy complexioned pretty girl...

***Hugs***
Love, xxx, Zoya
2006-06-25


Malin Johansson
A very strong poem here,
I have also met people like this, that makes other people to feel bad about themselves...
Regards
2006-06-25