a final note,

i may be young,
so much ahead?
is it wrong?
that i'll soon be dead?
that i feel i have done,
all that i can,
or ever cauld do,
in this life,
i've been happy with you,
i was never a wife,
or a mum,
i've had a few laugh's,
some were so dum,
i want you to think of me,
as someone,
who had too much fun,
who was happy,
as she went to her death,
as i take, my last breath,
i say thankyou, and i love you,
always,







Poetry by UnforgivenAngel
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Written on 2006-06-28 at 20:20

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F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
"i want you to think of me,
as someone,
who had too much fun,
who was happy,
as she went to her death,"

- im not too sure what to think of this on the whole sorry... but this passage ive just quoted, i have to admit is the strangest wish ive heard a suicidal person ever express... someone who had too much fun? that doesnt work very well for me... a person whos having too much fun in their life doesnt kill themselves... ? sorry for sticking on that but it really stands out for me...

later... xx
2006-07-05


kittipuusen
it was greate :)
but stay alive.. you have a whole life ahead! no reason to give it away yet! :) joy can still show up :D
loved it ;)
*hugs* :)
2006-06-29