This is the work of Kerry Morrison who sent it to me for my opinion, so i explained what I could see in her words and asked if she would like to work on it for her, and so I came up with Fate as Planned.


Longing in Sorrow

I wish your love was clear as day
Not clouded torture and dismay
For how I long for love that’s true
Everything I touch reminds me of you

I knew deep in my heart
That it was always you, right from the start
But feeing the way that I have for some time
Knowing your heart would never truly be mine

How I’ve longed in the sorrow
Just waiting for tomorrow
Hoping and praying
That your love is remaining

Will the clouds ever part
So I can finally feel in my heart
That you love me the way that you say that you do
And that the skies will finally be clear and blue


Copyright©KerryMorrison2023




Poetry by peter williams
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Written on 2023-09-25 at 11:49

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