Alan J Ripley
All sorts of thoughts rang through my head
As I read the title, The poem did the same.
Do electric sheep have electric dreams
A si fi book by P. K Dick nothing to do with poetry...
It's strange how a few words can invoke ones thought process.
The title alone acts like a muse inviting me in. The poem does the same.
Regards Alan
2024-02-11

D G Moody
I'm with Lawrence and Allen, this poem 'zings', and your use of metaphor is superb, as is that final stanza - Bravo Thomas!!
2024-02-11

Lawrence Beck
The final stanza is a knockout. Nice work.
2024-02-11

Griffonner
A masterpiece IMHO. Much deserving of accolade. To those of us of mature years will understand this poem as if we ourselves had written it.
Blessings, Allen
2024-02-11