Our first time

Our first time
Everything was so right
So thought through
Your picture
That you gave me
Was lying conspicuously at my room
So you'd see it
So you'd notice that I appreciated it
Appreciated you
I had my hair loose
So I could hide behind it
Whenever I'd feel stupid
I didn't need it though
It just fell in your face as we kissed

I was so scared
So inexperienced
Vulnerable
But I should have known
Nothing lasts forever
And nothing matters




Poetry by Ingvild
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Written on 2006-07-11 at 18:46

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Raven Alarco
wow, this was very good. I loved it it was so honest and pure.
2006-07-13


Ingvild
Thanx a lot both of you :)
2006-07-13


Zoya Zaidi
This is a lovely forthright confession of the experience, so often met with.
Well done, dear Ingvild!
***Hugs, and Welocome to the bay***
Love, xxx, Zoya
2006-07-12


Lourdes
wow. This was an honest, pure and beautiful write. Your images were crystal clear and your sentences full of (his)tory in few words.
A really good write and WELCOME TO THE BAY!!!

2006-07-11