its autumn and dragon flies

it is august
i move on roads
between green orchards
dragon flies are many
the crickets at night make noises
my town has fallen silent
there are not friends anymore



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Written on 2025-08-03 at 17:38

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MIRZA AHMER BEG The PoetBay support member heart!
i want to explain the last two lines but let it be as you said ....:)
2025-08-04


Griffonner The PoetBay support member heart!
Realistically this could be a description of where I am, though I am unsure of the final two lines: Is it that there are no friends at all there, or only because it is night and everyone is indoors or in bed? Mind you, leaving people guessing is a clever technique in writing. Blessings, Allen
2025-08-03