I just think it's so hard to love someone when you don't know their true feelings.
The poem is a little messed up their is about no structure in it. Maybe it's not even a poem, only a draft of all the thoughts in my mind ...



Have you ever cried?

Have you ever cried
So load that even the radio couldn't prevent others from hearing it?
Have you ever felt water on your cheeks besides from the rain?

Have you ever felt this pain?

Have you ever been affected by the consequences
Of what's not being said between us?

And
Have you ever sung our song
To somebody else
Knowing that I wouldn't hear it?

Is this what you want?

If you want us
I need you to get through to me
Tell me it's possible to believe
In me and you
In breathing
And butterflies

Because
I'ts hard to love you if you don't love me back




Poetry by Ingvild
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Written on 2006-07-14 at 18:36

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ChiLLie
Det er alltid sånn med gutter.. de vil bare ikke snakke om ting, de får det rett og slett ikke til.. tenkte jeg skulle ringe en fyr jeg er veldig gla i i morra og snakke ut med han... Leste diktet ditt og tenkte f*** heller, jeg er ikke den eneste

wish me luck!!

loved the poem, it stuck to my brain, and I had to read it once more..=)=)
2006-09-11


kittipuusen
This was lovley :)
I loved it !
It was just something about it that made it so greate!
You expressed the love so wonderful and strong!
Keep up the good work (Y)
2006-07-16


Zachary P. B.
Unrequited. Love can be the most humbling and joyful experience in our lives. Funny how it works. Excellent poem.
2006-07-14