the form kills me

quand une bouteille pleine
de vieux rhum tombe
par terre
c'est la forme de la bouteille
qui casse
par le vieux rhum

when a bottle full of old rhum
falls onto the ground
it's the bottle that shatters
in pieces
not the rhum




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Written on 2025-11-03 at 14:48

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2025-11-03