It started out as a poem, but i desided to make it a little song insted.didnt think it sounded right as a poem, so i made a little melody in my head,and i think it sounded ok....


So Hold Me... (Song)


Hold me
Let me know you`re near


The barenaked tree
All the dead leaves
It`s an unpleasant sight
Everywhere the eye see


So hold me
Let me know you`re near
know you`re here
I open my arms for you to stay
don`t ever tell me you`ll go away


The wind so cold
A chill down my spine
Try to spread my wings
and fly
I fell down to die


So hold me
Let me know you`re near
know you`re here
I open my arms for you to stay
don`t ever tell me you`ll go away


Sitting in the sky
floating by
Remembering the days
you had a smile in your face

I open my arms for you to stay
don`t ever tell me you`ll go away


Let me be near
Let me be here
Open my arms
Open my heart


So hold me
Let me know you`re near
know you`re here
I open my arms for you to stay
don`t ever tell me you`ll go away



Poetry by Mr.Mist
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Written on 2006-07-15 at 23:50

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Amanda K
this is a very special poem.

thank you
2007-03-25


Andy
Great song. I'd listen to it definateley... nice accustic gitaur melody and yeah... huzzah great stuff.
2006-07-19


liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
WOW!
the second verse
"the wind so cold
a chill down my spine
try to spread my wings
and fly
I fell down to die"
that really brings tears to my eyes
and it reminds me of some of my earlier
poetry.

I wish I could hear
the melody to this
as it flows really well
and is a great piece of writing.

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liz
2006-07-16