This is a companion piece to a more solemn poem I wrote called “If We Knew.”


The Council’s Verdict

“Let the council commence,”
she buzzed with a nod,
the Queen Bee, the wisest,
so she was in charge,
of this jury of species,
the small and the large.

And lest you think
only animals rule
the bugs and the fish
and the trees are there, too.
Mother Earth watches over,
to each one she’s true.

The first man approaches
his eyes opened wide
never thinking he’d be judged
by the beings outside,
he thought he the master
of all that resides.

The questions commence
each one a hard blow
to the man’s sense of self,
and he starts to feel low
as his actions are read,
an indictment, he knows.

He was careless and selfish
when life was at stake
for insects, for forests,
for those on his plate,
he thought only his needs
carried the weight.

“Guilty,” they ruled,
and she buzzed with a smile,
“A chance you’ll be given,
in our shoes, walk a mile.”
To earth he returned
to reflect for awhile.

When next he woke up
his eyes they were five,
he thought, “I’m a bee,”
but there was no hive.
He sniffed and he flew,
drawn straight to a pile…

Of poop; he was lucky,
she’d made him a fly,
a few days to a month
and then he would die,
or sooner if a man
with a paper did spy.

Smush!




Poetry by Melinda K Zarate The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2026-03-26 at 18:54

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Alan J Ripley The PoetBay support member heart!
Hi Melinda from sunny Eastbourne,
Or so the brochures say.
All our little critters from,
The common ant carry with them,
Tiny little umbrellas.
Because it rains so much, even the stick insects
Always put their wellies on. The old centipede
Sometimes forgets that it may have rained,
He goes to his front door looks out and says,
" Oh no not again goes back inside ".
Then starts to put on his wellies once again.
Loved your poem. One of the poem's I wrote
Was called critters. Regards Alan.
2026-03-27


Alan J Ripley The PoetBay support member heart!
Oops
2026-03-27


Sameen The PoetBay support member heart!
Very clever. I also love the use of off rhymes
2026-03-27


melanie sue The PoetBay support member heart!
I love this clever and satirical wit of yours...
I'd write more but my poor fingers are getting worn.
Suffice it to say- I love this!
2026-03-26