I went along on a ride on Arquious train (Backward Carriage), this is my experience.


Momentum

Each bump
One rail
One heartbeat

Each thump
One step
One destination

Unknown

I turn to the window
Beside me

A peripheral past
and future
in passing



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Written on 2026-05-30 at 01:48

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Sameen The PoetBay support member heart!
I love the movement in this. The end though is a bit too abstract. I’d love if it was grounded by an image. A visceral one at that.
2026-05-30