"If photography is allowed to supplement art in some of its functions, it will soon have supplanted or corrupted it altogether, thanks to the stupidity of the multitude which is its natural ally."
Charles Baudelaire, The Salon of 1859



Art?

Whether man
Whether machine
Whether beast

Every word is a remix in expression

A parrot reciting Shakespeare
Do its limitations make it less art?

Art is story transcending medium




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Written on 2026-08-26 at 11:31

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ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
Art is in the eye, the ear, the mind of the beholder, is it not!
ken d williams
2026-09-12


Sameen The PoetBay support member heart!
Fucking hell, I've missed yer poems. This piece has a bold and philosophical ambition that I fucking respect. The Baudelaire epigraph especially sets the tone and a genuinely interesting tension to the whole piece. How do we define art? Who gets to make it? Is originality even possible?

That part about the parrot is provocative and perfectly placed. It pushed me, as the reader, to confront my assumptions about art.

The brevity of the poems works well. However, I think it also leaves some of the piece's most compelling ideas underdeveloped. "Every word is a remix in expression" is such a strong line but it kinda just appears. It doesn't arrive with enough surrounding texture to fully land.

Also, the opening 1,2,3 punch of man, machine and beast feels more like a list than an integrated gesture while the final line: "Art is story transcending medium" reads as a hurried conclusion that hasn't quite been earned by what precedes it.

However, that's your style and I appreciate it. You are clearly wrestling with big ideas and I, for one, think that's exciting. I would just gently urge you to give those ideas a bit more room to breathe which could create a sharper and more thought-provoking poem.
2026-09-01


Albert Vynckier The PoetBay support member heart!
I am not sure what you think of photography, I think you consider it a minor art?
2026-08-26