tanka

 

i wrote this yesterday

 

near the power line

a pine's latent ornaments

hint of autumn's cones

 

an aged squirrel makes due

on last year's mouldering seeds

  

it isn't really my style

it came to me while in the park

i used to read japanese

and chinese poetry

lots of senryu tankas haiku

lots of han shan and bashō

now, i ramble, counting syllables

is counter to the rambling

though i often count lines

fourteen being my default

this tanka appeared with the pine

and squirrel, now that i read it

if feels stilted, but it does express

what i was seeing at the time

 

 





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Written on 2026-07-28 at 21:12

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Melinda K Zarate The PoetBay support member heart!
I really like it. Can see it clearly. Very nice!
2026-07-28