i've had this poem on my desktop for a while. it's so minimalist as to be almost nonexistent. it feels incomplete, yet every line i add detracts. i'll call it a sketch.




lin has her first young man

 

he tickles her fancy

he is devoted

she shows him off

 

he does things to her

she likes

kisses and such

she likes his gentle hands

his brown eyes

 

she thinks it fun 

to have a boy

she wears him well

 

 

 

 

 

 





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Written on 2026-09-05 at 02:03

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Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
No, I think it is complete. I love short poems. Good for Lin and her boyfriend.
2026-09-05