John and the people


What if John could finally fulfill himself in hell—
where he could kill immortal people over and over,
forever, only for them to rise again from the ashes,
like Sisyphus pushing his rock uphill,
again and again, in his endless search for meaning?

John and all the bad guys who murdered innocent people,
finally brought together for eternity—
a perfect little circle of hell.






Poetry by Albert Vynckier The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2026-09-10 at 05:13

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Clara Mae Gregory The PoetBay support member heart!
Logically speaking, if anyone had such a power that they could kill an IMMORTAL person even just one time, much less many times- then you have a paradox. They can't be immortal if they can be killed. To create a special kind of immortality souly for the purpose of an eternal punishment, that operates as torture by repetitive resurection followed by destruction forever is twisted, distorted theology. It would indeed, surely be like a Ground Hog Day The Movie Kind of Hell for sure. If Biblical facts are correct,
IMMORAL PEOPLE (sinners) can be saved, repurposed for a permanent and holy IMMORTALITY
2026-09-10


Clara Mae Gregory The PoetBay support member heart!
What if "John" did not want that job, for who would? It is an evil idea that you've invented and presented. Is this a poem or a puzzle?
2026-09-10