Closest to you

There was a time
When I was closest to you
You knew me best
Just the way that I knew you

But suddenly everything was over
And you found someone new
Still I feel
Closest to you

You love her so much now
Just the way she loves you too
Even though it isn't right
I still feel closest to you

I feel like I'm erased
And I've realized it's true
As you put her arms around her
Now she is closest to you




Poetry by Ingvild
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Written on 2006-07-25 at 18:44

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Zachary P. B.
Beautiful words, Ingvild. =) As sad and undesirable as they are, they are beautiful. I'm sorry that you're sad. =(

Sorry about not reading until today, I've been on holiday...

Z
2006-07-31


kittipuusen
Wow.. This is really beautiful :)
A broken heart.. :( Not that beautiful..
I loved this poem :)
So full of feelings :)
Hugs*
2006-07-25