BlueyedSoul
Falling in love shall never be an illusion for the romantic heart Michael ....it is real and burns warmly in all of us

~BlueyedSoul
2006-07-31

Emelén
she will forgive you I am sure
again and again
because youre a fool if you let go now
-beautiful images here
2006-07-30

Malin Johansson
We are all blinded by fire sometimes...
The fire can make miracles to come true and it can also destroy us... A good poem here Father..
Regards and hugs C daughter
2006-07-29

F.i.in.e Moods
hey salut... this is a good poem, apologies of the heart coming through... trespass committed on another for whatever the circumstances establishing it's not alright to be overtly amorous with someone... and the words of apology for trespassing the boundary is heartfelt here... sensitive and caring as always... i enjoyed reading this... thanks for sharing :f

later... xx
2006-07-29

Kathy Lockhart
the sweet sincerity of the poem, the admissions of vulnerability, are so soft in their revelation that one could not help but feel drawn to the writer--into his hopeless, helplessness. Beautifully written. :) kathy
2006-07-29

night soul woman
A wonderful poem! Your poem gave me a mental picture of a butterfly that got blinded by the seductive dance of the flames and flew to close to the fire until her wings got burned!
Good work here Mike!
2006-07-29

Arti
The ending is so honest....
"I meant no harm
No illicit tawdry disrespect
I was drawn much to close to the flame
I was hopeless
Helpless
And blinded by the fire."
Wonderfully honest write. Love it.
2006-07-29

Zachary P. B.
Burn on, hearts of young and old,
Burn on and feed our fires
Our tempting desires
Burn on...

Loved it Michael,
Zachary
2006-07-29