Enjoy the fucking view

Come a little closer,
enjoy the fucking view.
This is a coward's run,
let's see what you have done.

My eyes have left me blind.
My mouth refuses to speak.
My soul is a drifting boat,
with a body's thin coat.

I could leave you freezing,
in a storm, cold and bare.
Let go of the fucking leash,
watch you bleed of unease.

Come a little closer,
and see what we've become.
Enjoy the fucking view.
I think I'll find a new.






Poetry by Daybreaker
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Written on 2005-08-30 at 20:53

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MaybeMemories
Wow. Amazing. I love the lines:

"Come a little closer,
enjoy the fucking view."

The whole thing is great though. The wording is perfect. You are definitely talented. Great job =)

-nikkki
2005-09-02