the flames of unrequited love often fall like tears from the windows to the soul or heart of a woman.


Fate of Tears (Tanka)

tenderness ignites
love's hidden embers to flame
glowing as fire burns
creating warmth from within
eyes pour truth through silent tears

Kathy Lockhart
8/31/06







Haiku by Kathy Lockhart
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Written on 2006-08-31 at 07:56

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Will
Beautiful once again....
2006-08-31


Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
Beautifully expressed.
2006-08-31


Phyllis J. Rhodes
So beautiful! Interestingly, this sparked a mind movie of the Prodigal Son falling into his father's forgiving arms. Then a scene of a woman broken by neglect, being touched by Jesus and immediately realizing her full worth.
2006-08-31



So very true! And so very hurting and beautiful!
2006-08-31


Arti
Great write Kathy! I love the last line "eyes pour truth through silent tears"
Good job!
2006-08-31


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
hi there Katherine so sad yet so beautiful in its gentle longing well done and hugs for you rgds mike
2006-08-31


Arti
Great write Kathy! I love the last line "eyes pour truth through silent tears"
Good job!
2006-08-31


Arti
Great write Kathy! I love the last line "eyes pour truth through silent tears"
Good job!
2006-08-31



Lovely tanka ..beautiful words !!!kissess(daughter)
2006-08-31


keith nunes
lovely piece kathy
2006-08-31


Dan Cederholm
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Hey Kathy!!!

This Tanka is so good . . . and all the tears

that is falling for love . . . Oh my oh my . . .

Beautiful written Kathy!!!

Regards Dan

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2006-08-31