As always read nice and slow.


The missed past (Coolaaron challenge)


There is a past that i miss
it exists only in my dreams
the things i did
the things i said
i never got to play that scene
where you sat across the table
and looked into my eyes
and said - "I love you"
that's all it ever - should've been.


© Rik - 31/08/2006






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Written on 2006-08-31 at 19:35

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F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
(yahoo crying smiley) ;) here's my heart having melted into a puddle on the floor... so poignant these words you write... you just have a way of expressing these things so beautifully, it stirs emotions in me, every time... bookmarked... *hug* xx
2006-09-01


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
rik this is a beautiful and moving poem well done you are back in the swing again well done

stick around man if you can rgds mike
2006-09-01


BlueyedSoul
...the missing part we all seem to not want to let go of in love....wonderfully written, full of emotion and borders on real passion and longing.
loved it!!
~Cindy
2006-09-01


Mr.Mist
This is some of the most beautifull writing I think I have ever read..you should try publishing a book with you poetry..I know I would by it..and I have a feeling I would not be the only one!!

"Bookmarked"

-mr.m
2006-09-01


night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
Oh My God !I think I have a cardiac arrest!

My heart skipped several beats at the end of this poem!The last lines were the "lines of execution" for my heart!
*storm of applause*
I am blown away by this piece of art! I love this poem it killed me slowly!
*bookmarked*

WOW WOW WOW! Well written! Very well written!!!
2006-09-01


Kathy Lockhart
moving me to sigh and the sadness breaks my heart. Beautifully written! kathy
2006-08-31


Rob Graber
"I never got to play that scene...": I find this for some reason quite moving. Effective piece!
2006-08-31


seda
very well written :)
2006-08-31