A chance remark in a PM That 'Heavan is where the heart decides' produced this lillibonelle and due credit is given to my cowriter for her gentle and subtle following of my first stanza. I wrote the third and she wrote the final one.


The Truth Within Your Eyes. A co write by lastromantichero and Aliena

It is due credit to Aliena that this poem is produced here and I want to thank her for her wonderful help in the final outcome and for agreeing to cowrite with me again.



Heaven is where the heart decides
Soft emotions the soul will hide
Then a latent love often denies
What is the truth within your eyes

Soft emotions the soul will hide
Lest wounds of old might bleed again:
All tenderness is put aside,
Hard-heartedness it wants to feign

Then a latent love often denies
That sense is lost within the mind
As a stronger love is borne within
A caring friendship you can find


What is the truth within your eyes?
Smile to your friend and he will see it clear,
As evident as you will see his face
Express a friendship tender and sincere





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Written on 2006-09-02 at 18:11

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Kathy Lockhart
you both create beautiful poems together. This is another of those beauties. xx kathy
2006-09-02



It is always a pleasure to write with you! I am very happy about this lilibonelle, and thank you for having written such a fine first stanza. In the lilibonelle, it is the first stanza that plays a decisive role for the whole text, since it determins the beginnings of the other three.
2006-09-02