Sorry for the romantics amongst you but the hero just got real for a short interlude of fun and bitter sweet


If i gave you a rose by M.A.Meddings

If I gave you a rose
For every day
My eyes adhored you
And I simply worshipped you
You would
Have a home full of roses
And nowhere
To sit in comfort




Poetry by lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-09-03 at 15:43

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Arti
Nowhere to sit in comfort... so she'd find her way into your home! Or better still, into your lap... lolol. Sorry, but I'm incurable!
2006-09-03


Troll
Good point!!

there is something about this... just something i can't put to words, but i'll bookmark it and see if i can put my finger on it later...

just awesome, i love it
2006-09-03


Zainab
Nice poem here loved this piece
Yes full of roses
Rate:5

Thanks mike once again for your beautiful words in way you wished me
2006-09-03



:) the poem itself is like a sweetly perfumed rose, given with a smile and a wink!
2006-09-03


Kathy Lockhart
Still you are The Hero even in your humor! This is a delightful, light, romantic read! So, I bet she would stand there in awe...then maybe pull some petals off, enough to cover her bed, then lie down upon the petals taking in the sweet aroma of each rose! :) kathy
2006-09-03