BlueyedSoul
I see

~Cindy
2006-09-15

Arti
This is a beautiful write... Very romantic! :)
About the form, this write is similar to a double etheree. An etheree is a poem that goes from one syllable to 10 syllables, and a double etheree is two stanzas, one going from one to 10 and the second from 10 to 1. Hope that helps! :))
2006-09-14

Phyllis J. Rhodes
You have sculpted a true piece of art and it demands adoration by its very existence.
2006-09-14

wee2souls
a very beautiful!!!!!!!
expressions to the one
who grabbed you within
pulling at your heart string!!
lovely this read!!
cindy:))
2006-09-14

keith nunes
such elegance amid such difficult rules you set yourself. top marks
2006-09-13

Kathy Lockhart
This is beautiful. I like your style too. xx kathy
bookmarked
2006-09-13

Just so very you, hero!
I think I've seen similar poem forms before, but not completely sure. However it is, this is a beautiful and delicate text!
2006-09-13

Emelén
and this syllable form very inspiring and geniusly good lookin too !
2006-09-13

Emelén
This is exceptionally beautiful. I'm dazzled and just... wow, you're a magician.
2006-09-13