shortness


A world of his Own

Doubtlessly lost in his house of pain
motivation means nothing to those with nothing to gain
he wanders through each day with a real blank stare
his body is the shell of what it could be and i dare
you to figure something out that neither of us have known
about a boy who's lost in a world of his own







Poetry by Painful Profits
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Written on 2006-09-15 at 03:04

Tags Doubted  Unknown  Mystery 

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ceciliaviola
I liked the rhyme and the rhytm in the text however, not too keen on the "yea" at the end.
2006-09-15


Saga
Nice flow on this. Kinda sad, but ice flow nonetheless!!!
2006-09-15