The rapture and joy of Love. I rewrote this and posted it to comply with the rules as Rob outlined. It is now a true heroetheree


Tender Trap by M.A.Meddings an entry to the Nepenthes modified etheree challenge

Please
My love
Rapture me
In a yearning
So secretly for you
And where I will enjoy
That enchanting tender trap
I fell so helplessly into
With cinnamon eyes so beautiful
Your smile I found so irresistible
And my poor heart was your prisoner
Defenceless before your beauty
Bewildered and restless
Yet content in caring
As yet unending
And so to thee
Gentle love
Rapture
Me




Poetry by lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-09-17 at 16:39

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Coolaaron88
Looks like someone is hooked on her. But its ok romance is fun. : )

~Aaron Rowe
2006-09-24


Arti
Wowee. A hero writes a heroetheree from his heart. Wowee write, wowee form. Should probably tell Rob to add another rule to the form: the write should be romantic, to match you!
2006-09-18


Kathy Lockhart
Another sigh escapes my lips! ahhhhhhh! :) kathy
2006-09-18


Kathy Lockhart
Beautiful words from a very talented poet! Whatever the form you decide to take you make it your own. :) kathy
2006-09-17