Now that was a piece of given for the "First Love challenge". To you, Nicole!!!


Young and nervous,
I heard the rumors around school,
The love notes and all friends telling me,
I just didn't think it was true, until I saw,
You, of course,
What can I say, after over ten years,
It still shines in my memories,

That first smile,
That first touch,
I guess we were both nervous,
But we tried our hardest,
Not to let it show,
We hanged out together at recess,
Exchanged gifts,
And got mad when we heard,

"Blah- Blah and Blah Blah sitting on a tree,

And then it came, that kiss,
It still tingles upon the lips of this somewhat, mature man,
Sometimes I wonder, what ever happened to her?,
Maybe she married, has a family and probably smiling,
After by some strange circumstance, she is reading this now,
Who knows, but tomorrow,

Tomorrow, how Morrissey said,
"And if it does come, will I still be human?",
Yesterday tingles of the lips,
And tomorrow wonders are hand in hand now,
Walking through that playground,
Through memories,
And finally through who we are, then and now,

The dancer moves without a trace,

Poetry by Saga
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Written on 2006-09-24 at 04:04

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lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
hi there
This is such a beautiful descriptive text of a first love and it is so rhythmic well done rgds mike

First times a charm. : )

~Aaron Rowe

a sweet charming remembrance of first love...very nice saga


keith nunes
it would amazing if she read your poem! lovely piece of writing and an oh so sweet