This text is erotic but not graphicly so. It attempts to describe in gentle words the beauty of making love. Hope it works.


The Sacred Mountain by M.A.Meddings

I nestled amongst the scented flowers
Upon the sacred mountain
And found your joyous cries of pain
An eager gasp to my silken touch
Then I found my world in you again
As my powerful pride sought no advice
In an ecstacy we both provide
The path to a glorious paradise
You and I engulfed, entwined
Give ourselves to an illicit love
But in our helpless raptured minds
Our pleading desires are all we have
And the gentle flight of loves soft dove
Becomes us both as we unite
A breathing, needing pleasure ride
Upon the sacred mountain




Poetry by lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-09-28 at 10:07

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you're really a person i should learn a lot from...got no words to xpress your talent.
2009-12-21


Arti
Satisfaction, pure and guaranteed with you around. Way to go!
2006-09-28


Kathy Lockhart
this is soft, gentle, and sensuous. Ahhhh! :) kathy
2006-09-28


BlueyedSoul
Always a lovely trip up the mountain, yes quite lovely.
~Blue
2006-09-28


Zoya Zaidi
Tender and full of desire- of unrequeted love? (Tell me if I am wrong Mike?)
All the best,
Love,
Zoya
2006-09-28


J. E.
This is poetry. I don't find it hard to believe that you're getting published, you deserve it. It was a pleasure to read this poem, and I am looking forward to read more of you.

Sincerely,
J. E.
2006-09-28



Softly erotic, the way only you can write.
Just beautiful!
2006-09-28


keith nunes
beautifully put! an intelligent on take it
2006-09-28


Zainab
Don't only hope
It worked
Rate:5
2006-09-28