Perhaps a bit pompous.. Based on the myths and actual stories about Homunculus.Hohenheim was a scientist in the 15th century that believed the semen already consisted of a living organizm.All you needed was to feed it with blood and a person would grow ou


The Homunculi

Dazzling light,oh how you shine
as I lay my dear to rest
I shall not whimper,nor whine
In death's realm you are a guest

Hohenheim,Enlighten me
As I draw circles in the sand
to pay the equivalent fee
I must proceed as planned

His flaming locks so vivid
against the pale,ghostly skin
Tiny scars so livid
Oh,Lord forgive my sin

I shall retrieve my fay
with Faith and Alchemy's might
I dare not hope,but may
you by law return alright




Poetry by Lokiane
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Written on 2006-10-06 at 12:50

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Rex Panthera
the theories of the old science is very fascinating, especially since the often are on the borderline of myth and occultism.
2007-10-27


Zoya Zaidi
A very interesting read!
**hugs**
Zoya
2006-10-07


keith nunes
this takes me down deep into another realm from whence there is no return. cool
2006-10-07


Thomas Selnes The PoetBay support member heart!
Oh, you are here! Might not remember me, I'm schlink from dikt.no ;) I see you have revised this, yes? Well, it's still a wonderful read!

Welcome to the bay :D
2006-10-06