She Told Me Straight

Closing down at 11pm – the bar is dead and so is town
In my right hand I hold a number, she gave it to me
As she left. What a beauty she is – Gabriela. We talked
And talked and shared some sad stories and laughed
At the happy times. She was honest and at the
End she told me straight - she is a man




Poetry by loomer
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Written on 2006-10-08 at 03:14

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Amanda K
Sorry Tough not touch:D
2006-10-10


Amanda K
hhhhhhhhhhh.She was He after all. It's ok we learn in life thru touch experiences.
2006-10-10


pia
Well at least you had a wonderful time with this Gabriella or should we say Gabriel You cant say that about all dates..Pia
2006-10-08


Zoya Zaidi
Wow!
What an anticlimax!
You do have a lovely sense of humour!
I have a feeling we are going to be friends!
***Warm hugs***
Love,
Zoya
2006-10-08


Kathy Lockhart
Now you have her number and his as well. What will you do? what will you do!
2006-10-08